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Gise I need some art help..! There's been this WoW scene I've wanted to illustrate for a while now, but it's really really hard to incorporate emotion into a picture! T_T I can see it in my head just fine but it just won't come down on paper...!

Basically, Tom and I were grinding random mobs in Hellfire Peninsula, Outland. We were behind a random stone wall, with a fabric roof-thing over us, taking a break. I see the ground shake, really slow footsteps, and hear that awful sound of screeching metal - but with a ghastly evil personality about it. I swerve the camera to see the Fel Reaver walking RIGHT by us, close enough for it to be REALLY FREAKING HUGE as it always is, but far enough away that it doesn't come after us. It just walks by and I gape at it 'cause that thing scares me. Hits for WELL over 3k/hit.

And that's the scene I want. But my thumbnails keep failing dfsjifdjhuirthgreisied so I need help to do this properly T_T;
See this is the Fel Reaver. This picture doesn't do it justice as it's HUGE OH GOD.
And this is vaguely what I've been trying to achieve and failing. Note how I definitely failed at drawing the Reaver. But that's not the point :D;

Tweaked/stretched it about in Photoshop a bit, this is a bit closer to what I wanted but it's still not saying "THIS IS SCARY HO NOES!" to me @_@

Ideas?;;;

Oh and while I'm here, here's a picture I finished t'day:I'm really quite proud of it :D Started it after I hit 40 (shortly after portfolios?), worked a bit in May, and just finished it this afternoon. I used Bob's tricks on the lineart and they sototally worked.